Presenting The Pitch

Pictures Of Us Presenting Our Pitch

 Presenting our pitch was actually alright. We got good criticism and Bernard gave good feed back. Seen as we struggled in the beginning of our treatment. A lot of new ideas rose as some people suggested not using the tear drops and that bruises on Ryans arm as we don't want the audience to feel sorry for him. Bernard even said that 'As Ryan is the killer he should be making people cry and bruising people' which I could say was a fair argument. Also Bernard suggested we have another location apart from Ryan's living room. We then decided to have an opening clip of Laura(Ryans ex) with another person, preferably a new boyfriend or so. Then we'd have Ryan looking at them perhaps from an 'Over the shoulder' shot.