Rough Cut deadline coming fast, we were sort of rushing and becoming more and more nervous, so we started taking a good look at our film, and then recieved feedback from our teachers, who decided the beginning(Laura being stalked part) was too jumpy, and would make the film look complicated, especially with the short time we had. So that had to go(all that filming in the cold for no reason LOL).
With that in mind, we had got rid of some time, but we took a couple new scenes to make up for it. Both Mary and Phil suggested we use my tattoo to make the audience wonder what that's about, so we filmed my tattoo and arm, and also a my clenched fist to show anger. All of this was in close up, so the main focus is on the object.