To improve our film we had to add more extreme close ups, so we went and planned some more shots for example, a close up of the books, and we came up with an idea to include definitions from dictionaries, like 'addicted' and the circling of 'kill' to express his plans for the film. We also included the use of Ryans tatoos, as we thought this would express a more stalker like character.
We had the light and focused it on to the object or hands, and zoomed in the camera from different angles, to create an extreme close ups. At times there was some probems with the focus, so we had to take numerous shots. As we were filming in a classroom we had to make sure with our close ups meant you couldnt see anything that could tell someone the envirroment.